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     meaning they should only fail due to their own choices/shortsightedness
     *breaking out of the box is sort of like thinking out of the box which give them the feeling of being clever
 
-  check to see how far out of box (with some warning)
-  if (too far out || more segments out of box than in)than slip out of box from gravity
-  if going up slipping out due to gravity doesn't make sense so
-    just prevent the snake from going too far up instead (soft pause)?
+  target audience/experience
+    ~13-18-year-olds who enjoy competitive, skill-based, solo gaming
+    seated experience on the Meta Quest 3/3S
+    moderate learning curve
+    stylized visuals
+    fun to play daily for a couple weeks or so
 
   this means gravity could affect things even when in box
   and breaking through the box and coiling up on yourself allows you to fill the space strategically