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     stylized visuals
     fun to play daily for a couple weeks or so
 
-  this means gravity could affect things even when in box
-  and breaking through the box and coiling up on yourself allows you to fill the space strategically
-  the food could even be affected by gravity so everything kind of starts of 2d
-  and 3d feels like an awesome treat/clever trick the user can play rather than an overwhelming paradigm shift
+  start outside of the box (about 6-9 segments long)
+  snake is moving like normal but is parented to an offset pose that keeps their head centered
+  so you can easily get a feel for how the snake moves
+  (sort of like writhing around in zero g)
+  *dreamlike*
+  wake up in box
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