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 ```
 todo
-  reprioritize beta testing (new user exp)
-    i want the player to feel clever weighing options to balance risk and reward as they live with their choices(tail)
-    meaning they should only fail due to their own choices/shortsightedness
-    *breaking out of the box is sort of like thinking out of the box which give them the feeling of being clever
+  pitch
+    anime slasher with juicy dofs
 
   target audience/experience
     ~13-18-year-olds who enjoy competitive, skill-based, solo gaming
-      sprinkle in some pop culture relevant to that age demographic that's in good taste to target interests
-    seated experience on the Meta Quest 3/3S
+    360 standing experience on all openxr hmds
+    user/dev level editor for additional creative expression and content headroom
     moderate learning curve
-      start outside of the box (about 6-9 segments long)
-      slash is moving like normal but is parented to an offset pose that keeps their head centered
-      so you can easily get a feel for how the slash moves
-      (sort of like writhing around in zero g)
-      *dreamlike*
-      wake up in box
     stylized visuals
     fun to play daily for a couple weeks or so
-      playable with a half engaging vid or conversation in the background
 
-  make depth easier to judge
-    pseudo light source is coming from your face (maybe at a diagonal *higher up* angler fish)
-
-  benchmark
-    need to be able to play without moving/turning the box
-
-  start music on egg eat
-    to keep prior tutorial phase focused and a strong indication that auto move has kicked in
-
-  curved hanger
-
-  my tempo (zen mode *after initial release*)
-    on l_con tap (a) btn to step, and repeatedly to set tempo
-    once a tempo has been set you can stop tapping and you'll coast at that tempo
-    if you tap again it resets the tempo latch, so if you just tapped once it's an easy way to pause
-    and if you keep tapping you can control your pace and find a new tempo
-
-    long press (a) or tap (b) btn
-    to switch into coasting on tempo, in order to maintain the most control in ramping up and down speed with tapping without the tempo kicking in prematurely
-
-    this makes it easier to play alongside a video, as your attention span can drift in and out
-    and you can take tougher parts slower
+  core mechanics
+    stretch slash
+    revolver
+      flick reload
 
 bug(s)
-  slash can accidentally cover the menu
+  ...
 
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